Dargquon Ql'deleodna

sure, anytime, what were your ideas for how they had wings,(one could be that they were fallen angels banished from heaven to live on earth until their pennance was up(until ...

um what else...also, the contradiction of "for he is not here" and then a couple of lines on "yet he will always be here". that should be changed because he ...

this was cool, i never thought of a poem this way, nice thinking, and what ohhewwo said, are they real or ficticious(that spelled right?)

i liked this, its really good, were did you get the idea from, if anywere

sweet, 8), this is gonna turn out well, yeah what does tripe mean? im not gonna vote, stop being negative, make one of the things that we can vote on ...

lol, nice job though it was nice and descriptive..

that was FREAKING AWSOME!!!.. i wish i could write like that, ***** i cnat really write well at all, i wish i could, i just suck at it, but that ...

nice job, i wonder what will happen next, keep writing it

thanks

this was good, title umm i cant think of one, forget what incandesence said, he just likes to discurage people

nice

this is good kyle... snazy and real

that was really good, you should try to get it published or something.... that was good, there is room for a part 2 but there doesnt have to be one, ...

hmmm.. :-k :-k :-k this is good, i dont exactaly get the meaning (if it is obvious to other people, throw rocks at me).... i like it.... :?

great job, this story describes how i fell sometimes, all alone in the empty careless world, anyway awsome poem.